this story discussed a girl that was taking away from her mother because of abuse. She described her encounter with school and her first fight. Listen while i make this story come to life.

2 thoughts on “STORY”

  1. I liked this, especially the background noise. The noise of the fight was at the right volume so that it didn’t heavily compete with your voice.

  2. week 7 20/20

    Very nice. Excellent delivery. I also like the use of the impact sound before you read the line about kneeing her in the stomach. Good use of background music.

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